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Me again: I really liked your question, because if we don't have doubts, how can we arrive to faith? In this sense, i liked the poem--and now I have to think about and relate to all this for the next 3 days. So if your idea of a poem is to put me in motion--well, you did a pretty good job...but I still have this feeling that there is something within your language you are not telling me or yourself about.
posted by
jfm32
on November 14, 2009 at 1:07 PM
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Seems you hit a nerve, which could make great poetry if that was your intent. Sometimes I feel you are about ready to break out into some other kind of light. It's already imbedded in your language, and I'm still wondering why you can't see or grasp it because it's right in front of you, and you always seem to be touching it....language can lead us to our greatest experiences, but it can also box us in--an identification thing...words and ideas. With your gift, you should be able to blow me out into another srtaosphere.
When can I expect? Don't know much about hard love, but this was just an idea---me
posted by
jfm32
on November 14, 2009 at 12:39 PM
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Sinome, He cares...sometimes He seems thousands of miles away, or maybe
left us for good, but He never leaves those who love Him...
We feel your hurt and just pray you'll let it go..
...(I know, so much easier said than done)
posted by
Rumor
on November 14, 2009 at 10:14 AM
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Simone
And, maybe you’ll take out ideas for your poem from that bottle love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 13, 2009 at 3:51 PM
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Dear, dear Marta
Yes God cares about you and your pain. This is so cold and so sad. You share this incredible hurt and not more of the story of it. How could your love come to this? Why did it come to this? You are perfect in the eyes of the Lord, why do you feel another does not feel the same. We all love you without knowing you, because your gift has shown us your capacity to love, thus we love you. Do you love you? You have reason to love you I hope you do because God does. He loves you more than you can ever know.
posted by
Justi
on November 13, 2009 at 2:20 PM
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The story of my life
for the past year and especially now. Beautifully written and the emotions so very well expressed. Only I know God cares.
posted by
skye08
on November 12, 2009 at 8:15 PM
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...haunting!..."He causes his sun to rise on the evil and the good, and sends rain on the righteous and the unrighteous." Matthew 5:45...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on November 12, 2009 at 8:02 PM
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So sad Marta. sighs and longing in your stanzas but not empty hearted just lonely for restorion.
posted by
merkie
on November 12, 2009 at 11:04 AM
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A very gripping poem...wow
posted by
Ariala
on November 11, 2009 at 3:52 PM
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Ohh Sinome, this is touching...close your eyes and...
imagine the person to be right next to you the way you remember, bless you! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 11, 2009 at 2:24 PM
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Sinome
That person who experienced that sadness couldn't have been you, 'cuz you know G-d cares about you luv .
We love you
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 11, 2009 at 12:01 PM
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I like that bottle the past, life moves on but do we
posted by
Lanetay
on November 11, 2009 at 8:43 AM
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Very poignant.
posted by
Nita09
on November 11, 2009 at 5:37 AM
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Your romantic heart seizes, captures the whole epitome of Love ~ always
Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on November 11, 2009 at 4:54 AM
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What an awesome poem of contemplation, reflection and even surmising! Well done, indeed! Good to catch up you at a reasonable time after you have posted! I have up to neck in work with getting this poetry book ready for the publisher! I told Vicki we were putting in a lot of work for my first rejection! lol Have a great day Sweetie and love you the weight of two elephants, for it would be tons! lol sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on November 11, 2009 at 3:43 AM
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Bottled moments of a better day - beautifully written. I sense the joy and the pain of a lost relationship.
posted by
janey_
on November 10, 2009 at 10:09 PM
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The sadness cries out and reaches, touches, to soothe others' soul, Sinome. Only hope that they are not yours.
posted by
anib
on November 10, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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I hope that's not the case.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 10, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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So sad , you portray such emtiness and a deserted spirit. So well wriiten
posted by
Kabu
on November 10, 2009 at 7:19 PM
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