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Such incredibly sad inner turmoil.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 10, 2009 at 7:34 PM
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Sinome
How do you manage to keep being so creative about the emotional drame of life?
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 10, 2009 at 11:49 AM
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How often we have to wear a mask and smile, when the heart is breaking inside.
posted by
Nita09
on November 10, 2009 at 9:19 AM
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Wow what a great poem. Incredible how we can hoard around each other and still be so totally lonely....sometimes lonelier in a crowd than even if we were by ourselves. This really brought back some stuff for me...but in a good way...quite cleansing, actually. And the frustration of when someone finally talks to her, it seems unkind. Ironic. Thank you for those lovely lines, Sinome.
posted by
Darson
on November 10, 2009 at 9:06 AM
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I'm afraid that we all need to work at listening--really listening--for in this world, listening is much more necessary than any amount of words could ever be.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 10, 2009 at 8:44 AM
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this makes me just sigh and get all teared up ~ Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on November 10, 2009 at 4:52 AM
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Sinome - you have drawn a nice picture of the reality of things. Many people go through this and no body know the severe pain underneath. But all what people see is the beautiful smile (very sad)
thank you for sharing
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 10, 2009 at 3:46 AM
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A very poignant poem Sinome..very true to life.
posted by
shobana
on November 9, 2009 at 10:56 PM
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Sinome
A poignantly picturesque poem and so true of life
posted by
anib
on November 9, 2009 at 10:36 PM
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sure it hurts!
posted by
Star5_
on November 9, 2009 at 9:42 PM
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beautifully written and so sad
been down this road and your words are so very true.
posted by
skye08
on November 9, 2009 at 9:37 PM
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This has such truth in it so wonderfully written that I got
goose bumps.
posted by
Kabu
on November 9, 2009 at 8:18 PM
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"though they appear to care, its just for themselves they do" - ouch!
Sad, but true, and when they try to show they care their words just do more harm than good...(been there)...that's when you want to yell "Shut up please! You're hurting more than helping!"..
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posted by
Rumor
on November 9, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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...very sad...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on November 9, 2009 at 7:48 PM
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