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I was thinking what if, too! But, grab the next catamaran out of Miami and make it happen! Wonderful verse with a very strong close! Love you Sweetie! sammie  How's the recovery coming along?

posted by sam444 on November 9, 2009 at 4:17 AM | link to this | reply

oh what if ~  stunning imagery and descriptive desire --- This is touching ~ so full of genuine allure (I'd go) ~ Elyse xoxox

posted by elysianfields on November 8, 2009 at 8:54 PM | link to this | reply

...so very enticing...moon

posted by magic_moon on November 8, 2009 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

What a vividly promising haven that'll be. A most felicitous poem! xoxo.

posted by anib on November 8, 2009 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

Stuff dreams are made of

posted by skye08 on November 8, 2009 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Sounds of the silent beauty of love that you write, I hope you just go, and love

posted by WileyJohn on November 8, 2009 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds quite romantic.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 8, 2009 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

and leave our footprints in that sand as we stroll hand in hand
complete in our accord together.

posted by Kabu on November 8, 2009 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply