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That was just fantastic! How are you! Love you!!!! sammie
posted by
sam444
on November 6, 2009 at 8:12 PM
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A powerful kiss that must be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 6, 2009 at 6:21 PM
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wow how very romantic this is
posted by
Lanetay
on November 6, 2009 at 5:09 PM
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Sinome
Oh my goodness. I guess we don't get too old to remember those roads. Oh but walking on those strands of light and yes close to Heaven but too - too close to hell. Excellent. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poetry with us.
posted by
Justi
on November 6, 2009 at 4:25 PM
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Your writing opens doors to the past and/or gives just a peek in the window of the places we've been.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 6, 2009 at 3:50 PM
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Sinome
............"that place near heaven but too close to hell
which those who desire each other know all too well," Oh yeah, wonderfully expressed luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 6, 2009 at 10:19 AM
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You use such an amzing pen to create this scene of desire and passion .Wondrous writing again Marta!
posted by
merkie
on November 6, 2009 at 9:10 AM
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Sinome
posted by
Troosha
on November 6, 2009 at 7:27 AM
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Sinome - this poem has a lot a passion in it
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 6, 2009 at 4:35 AM
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Beautiful my dear Sinome
To some a trip down memory lane - either way superbly done my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 6, 2009 at 3:57 AM
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You are the Star
Wonderful memories are brought to mind and heart.
posted by
skye08
on November 6, 2009 at 3:19 AM
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How magical it sounds Sinome.
Fantastic poem.
posted by
shobana
on November 5, 2009 at 10:25 PM
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wow.......u are perfectly in love......
posted by
Star5_
on November 5, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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Wow....reading this reminded me of my dating years with Husband...not a bad place to return to...thank you!
posted by
Darson
on November 5, 2009 at 7:15 PM
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