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It's a beautiful start.
posted by
shobana
on November 5, 2009 at 3:56 PM
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IT STARTS JUST PERFECTLY. I AM THRILLED.
You have introduced the main characters quickly and we already know that Isabelle is pretty with long black hair, that she has a Shepherd friend and that there is something wrong with her. because she hobbled to the window. You have captured our interest without long worthless sentences. Well done and I long for more my baby girl.
posted by
Kabu
on November 5, 2009 at 2:32 PM
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Sounds Great!
I cant wait to read more.
posted by
StrickGold
on November 5, 2009 at 12:54 PM
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