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Thank you Samantha and I hope your plastic surgery on the blog turned out fantastic.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:13 PM
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Hardilaziz - Yes I think so. thanks so much.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:12 PM
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BCA - thanks so much and I wonder at that.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:11 PM
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Re: You say so much when you've no words, very skillfull ! - Ash
Thank you Ash. That's really nice of you to say that.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:10 PM
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My Sam - Thanks so much sweetie.Love you and am glad that you got your eyes away from the computer for a bit there.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:09 PM
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Abanerjee - Mere Dost, thank you and for your lovely concern.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:07 PM
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FSI - thanks so much.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:06 PM
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Wiley John - You wonderful person, you make it hard for me not to.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:05 PM
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Shamasehar - thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:05 PM
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Troosha - thanks so much and yes sometimes there arent.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:04 PM
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Thanks so much Romakay for your visit and comment.
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shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:03 PM
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Thank you so much Elyse - It is somewhat.
posted by
shobana
on November 3, 2009 at 11:02 PM
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nice!
posted by
Samantha39
on November 3, 2009 at 10:45 PM
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Wistful!
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 3, 2009 at 7:00 PM
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Until you find where the grass is greener love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on November 3, 2009 at 6:36 PM
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You say so much when you've no words, very skillfull ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 3, 2009 at 5:37 PM
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Finality for certain! Great imagery all the way through! I like the refrain-like couplet in the middle of the poem! Love you! I just got my blog copied today and am on overload but was so happy to come upon your poem! I am fading and just need to get my eyes away from a computer! lol Have a great day, Sweetie! Your sam
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sam444
on November 2, 2009 at 6:47 PM
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Shobs
The hurt was most effectively conveyed, with the force of the felt pain in equal measure. That aside, what an admirable ability to do so. I hope it was not real or personal. because we wait on poetesses like you to speak so that we can hear, we can listen
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anib
on November 2, 2009 at 5:31 PM
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What incredible pain the speaker is feeling!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 2, 2009 at 3:54 PM
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Shobana
Hey girl, that was too beautifully sad for me and you better have more words for us luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 2, 2009 at 11:17 AM
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Its like a wound........fresh,hurts & words don't help ......the poet just lets the pain flow on paper!
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shamasehar
on November 2, 2009 at 8:20 AM
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Shobana
Sometimes there are “no more words”…..
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Troosha
on November 2, 2009 at 6:52 AM
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chilling, and amazing. the end gave me goose bumps.
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RomaKay
on November 2, 2009 at 6:32 AM
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Shobana, this has a sadness ~ and the lines that echo carry such. of yearning and love. Tender and touching ~ Elyse
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elysianfields
on November 2, 2009 at 3:38 AM
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Thank you Betty, I will look after myself too, thanks so much for your concern.
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shobana
on November 2, 2009 at 1:23 AM
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You have a talent for putting profound thoughts in an everyday way; excellent. Look after yourself.
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elinjo
on November 2, 2009 at 1:21 AM
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Re: Shobana, this rings so much in my head ...
Straightforward - Does it? Sometimes I just don't know what to say too..thanks so much for your visit.
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shobana
on November 1, 2009 at 10:36 PM
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Shobana, this rings so much in my head ...
posted by
Straightforward
on November 1, 2009 at 10:25 PM
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