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Poisnant and stirring write Marta . This surely touches an aching heart.
posted by
merkie
on November 6, 2009 at 9:15 AM
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You have presented a mix of romance and sadness at the same time. I love your warm feeling in this poem. It is assured that your love is true
chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 2, 2009 at 5:07 PM
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I feel sad while reading this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 2, 2009 at 4:08 PM
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Sinome
"I love you, don't ever forget." If he remembers that kiss or If he reads your writing, he'll never forget luv.
Wiley & Kabu
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 2, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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Sinome
I could not help but be deeply moved by this.....
posted by
Troosha
on November 2, 2009 at 7:02 AM
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how sad its so hard to say goodbye and know its the end
posted by
Lanetay
on November 1, 2009 at 10:36 PM
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This is sooooo Beautiful
When Richard saw the Light, he called to me and said: "I see the Light, come quick so I can tell you bye." We kissed and I told him goodbye and I loved him and he did the same. He then turned blue and went semi-comatose for 3 days until I told him that his work here was done and he had taught Joe how to be the "Daddy" of our family and Joe would take care of me. He immediately released his soul. I was so blessed to have the opportunity to say goodbye to Richard and have him say goodbye to me. It is a memory I shall cherish forever.
posted by
skye08
on November 1, 2009 at 8:37 PM
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Sinome
Very touching. Goodbyes must be playing an important part in your life...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 1, 2009 at 6:56 PM
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This brought tears to my eyes...surrendering, relinquishing --- simply being strong and for Love
xoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 1, 2009 at 5:22 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on November 1, 2009 at 5:11 PM
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