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Sam - I can imagine how tedious it can be putting ten years worth of work back together!!.I hope you get it all together and it is a good habit to finish a project before you start on another..I know where are the secretaries when you need them!! I'm sorry I got back to you late. I did not get into blogit until now as my dad was hospitalized yet again. This time they found a clot in one of his arteries..so...Thank you so much for stopping by sweetie amidst all your work. love you too.
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shobana
on November 1, 2009 at 3:09 AM
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Re: Beautiful poem
Thank you lionreign. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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shobana
on November 1, 2009 at 3:05 AM
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Thanks so much Troosha - I feel that way too.
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shobana
on November 1, 2009 at 3:04 AM
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R.Retired - thanks so much. Glad you liked it.
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shobana
on November 1, 2009 at 3:03 AM
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BCA - thank you so much and Of course you will love the stream cause you have the eye of an artist and sees things in an artistic manner. Thanks once again.
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shobana
on November 1, 2009 at 3:02 AM
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Thank you for sharing. I love your personalization of the stream love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on October 30, 2009 at 5:22 PM
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Lovely peaceful poem, brings nature home to me.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on October 30, 2009 at 10:20 AM
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Shobana
I could
"Feel the Peace Within"... There's no doubt in my mind that nature=peaceful.
posted by
Troosha
on October 30, 2009 at 7:53 AM
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Beautiful poem
to describe a beautiful place and an utterly gorgeous message - I enjoyed this a lot
posted by
lionreign
on October 30, 2009 at 5:25 AM
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This was fantastic my Shobana! I especially liked this:
Nature tell us many things but man
does not comprehend
Or does he not want to listen
How very true, indeed! I have been consumed with putting ten years worth of work back together on my computer! It is so tedious! I am just working on my poetry now! I have been copying my poetry blog and comments! Heaven forbid Blogit were to have a problem and I lose even more! I have accepted ownership in my dilemma for I did not get it backed up and so I just need to keep plodding along and get it back together! I have a nasty habit of finishing a project before I move to something else! I need to relax with this one because it took a long time to get in on in the first place and it will take time putting it back! I will say I am getting better organized this time so there is always more good than bad in a situation for me! I am less fretful now that I am taking the time to protect my efforts! I hope you have your wonderful poetry backed up! I don't why we can't take our secretaries with us when we cease work! lol I was so spoiled over my career to have had a secretary! And wow, did I have some great ones! They were so good they became more like assistants than secretaries!
Oh my goodness, did I ever get a chuckle out of your riddle notation! I did not realize that was the answer! I thought it was a cue to really start thinking! lol on me! Love you dearly my friend! Your sam 
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sam444
on October 30, 2009 at 5:22 AM
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LOL, that was cute Shamasehar..but let me tell you it's a good place to go into a trance and I'll join you.LOL. thanks so much for your visit and cute comment.
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shobana
on October 30, 2009 at 1:52 AM
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The effect was so calming I felt I had gone in a trance,with trees & birds around me!
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shamasehar
on October 30, 2009 at 1:48 AM
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Thank you so much Betty because you understood exactly what I was trying to say. It is those unique voice and contributions that manifests what comes across. You have a lovely, peaceful and a happy time reading too Betty. Today I am just filled with weariness somehow. Take care.
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shobana
on October 30, 2009 at 1:42 AM
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'The trees do not tell the birds what to say..': that is very true. Every living entity has its own unique voice and own unique contribution. I've often experienced the joys of being massaged by the sea, but not by a stream.
Shobana, you put things very simply and very beautifully.
Have a peaceful and happy day.
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elinjo
on October 30, 2009 at 1:37 AM
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Wiley John - Thank you so much and peace & blessings to you too.
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shobana
on October 30, 2009 at 12:31 AM
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Shobana
Peace filled luv, a terrific poem. Shalom
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WileyJohn
on October 29, 2009 at 9:25 PM
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Thank you abanerjee. I am so happy to have you feel that peace with me. Enjoy your time reading.
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shobana
on October 29, 2009 at 7:50 PM
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Thank you so much Samantha for your visit and comment.
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shobana
on October 29, 2009 at 7:49 PM
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Thank you Chuck, so right there.
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shobana
on October 29, 2009 at 7:49 PM
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Thank you Taps and it is as you say.
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shobana
on October 29, 2009 at 7:48 PM
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Romakay - thank you.
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shobana
on October 29, 2009 at 7:47 PM
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This was so very peaceful and satisfying through visual description of all the feelings of the five senses, and the special beauty was in the communion - communion between the trees and birds, communion between the streams and the sun in their own mystical ways. This made a deep impression in my heart. Very, very well done and a fine teaching, Shobana
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anib
on October 29, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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nice work
posted by
Samantha39
on October 29, 2009 at 6:28 PM
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How can we not appreciate beautiful things that God gave us
I really enjoyed reading your poem. There was plenty of advice to learn
Keep on the good work. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 29, 2009 at 6:17 PM
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Everything a person needs to know can pretty much be learned from the lessons of nature, if a person really pays attention.
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TAPS.
on October 29, 2009 at 5:33 PM
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RomaKay
on October 29, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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FSI - thank you so much and I share the same sentiments.
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shobana
on October 29, 2009 at 4:09 PM
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I hope everyone feels peace as well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 29, 2009 at 4:03 PM
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