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Thank you for sharing. In any event you make a good analogy between thunder and brainstorming I think. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 30, 2009 at 5:43 PM
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This morning, when I read this, I got side tracked
remembering a quote from the movie "Long Hot Summer"
and the words of Clara (Joan Woodward) to Ben Quick (Paul Newman)
about how much she had to give a man.
I thought I commented, but I guess it was only in my mind.
Often your poems do that to me--get me started down a road and I don't get back.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 29, 2009 at 11:05 PM
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Sinome
Oh how lovely does she love him... If he hasn't any use for such love he is not a lover... Sure he does, she sees that in him. Such a heart will win. Don't worry your pretty head one bit, you are the only lady in his heart.
posted by
Justi
on October 29, 2009 at 6:54 PM
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wow...
that is a blow to the heart - what a superb poem, I think there is nobody who cannot empathise with this. I think this poem shines, even among the gems that are your poems xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on October 29, 2009 at 9:13 AM
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Poignant and powerfully expressed!
posted by
Nita09
on October 29, 2009 at 1:16 AM
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A one-sided relationship is no kind to have, but love must be given a chance!
posted by
calia14
on October 28, 2009 at 11:48 PM
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Fantastic! I love it! Love you, too! sammie
posted by
sam444
on October 28, 2009 at 8:18 PM
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you are very good at expression
posted by
Samantha39
on October 28, 2009 at 7:56 PM
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So beautiful as usual, my Romantique Sinome ~ and the way you echo the line at the end, perfect - The cadence and rhythm throughout is so soft, evocative and truly touching. Another beauty from a beautiful Soul ~
xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 28, 2009 at 7:49 PM
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Marta
Without shame, and without pride, that love ... regardless of either, is of the highest quality, godly, one can say, Radha's love for Krishna for example. Another is the kiss that makes him hers ... fantastic evocative imagery. Deserves a Wow xoxoxox -:)
posted by
anib
on October 28, 2009 at 7:34 PM
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wow.........you and lion, you guys tooooooo good.......it's a feast of
poetry
posted by
Star5_
on October 28, 2009 at 7:27 PM
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wow.........you and lion, you guys tooooooo good.......it's a feast of
poetry
posted by
Star5_
on October 28, 2009 at 7:27 PM
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such a heart breaking........lve is pain I agree, just as incubus sings luv
hurts!
posted by
Star5_
on October 28, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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That is so sad when one does not reciprocate.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 28, 2009 at 7:18 PM
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SUCH INSECURITY OFYOUNG LOVE SOMETIMES.
HE LOVES ME ENOUGH, DO I HAVE ALL OF MYSELF TO GIVE HIM. YOU PUT YOUR THOUGHTS TOGETHER SO WONDERFULLY.
posted by
Kabu
on October 28, 2009 at 5:35 PM
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