Comments on Show us your shorts...

Go to Life in the fast lane--where's the on ramp?Add a commentGo to Show us your shorts...

The best of luck, young Pat.  2,500 down to 800 is an amazing piece of editing!

posted by johnmacnab on October 27, 2009 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

PatB
Good luck my friend, I'll be prayin' for ya luv.

posted by WileyJohn on October 26, 2009 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

best of luck, and we know how good you are....good enough to win.......
it'sjust the luck now of who reads it and whether they have constipation that day.

posted by Kabu on October 26, 2009 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Best of luck to you and Vogue...
for all the factors where luck comes into it.  I don't doubt you have the rest covered.

posted by Ciel on October 26, 2009 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

Pat
I'm afraid I missed the story but knowing you it was an excellent write.  Good luck!

posted by Troosha on October 26, 2009 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Vogue -- I entered the same competition...
Wouldn't that be great, joint first...  Good luck, Vogue. If I can't win, I hope you do!

posted by Pat_B on October 26, 2009 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

Fancy that! I entered the same competiton yesterday with a story about Cleopatra and Marc Anthony. Title: How the battle of Actium was really lost. History re-written in my imagination. Perhaps we'll make joint 1st, what you reckon?

posted by vogue on October 26, 2009 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

The best of luck.
Pat, I wish you great success. I'm a member of Zoetrope also, I've just been critiquing a Sci Fi story about time travel, quite a good read. Soon, I'll upload my own book, which I wrote and watch for the feedback. Once again, good luck and I hope you score.

posted by Hackthorne19 on October 26, 2009 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

Pat
I do wish you luck! I remember that story, and liked it tremendously!

posted by Nautikos on October 26, 2009 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply