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                    Pat
                
                I agree with Hackthorne - excellent dialogue! And that Woodward and Bernstein thing is a nice touch...

  
                
                    posted by
                    Nautikos
                     on October 25, 2009 at 5:30 PM
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                    A Great Read
                
                I love the dialogue - very real.  
                
                    posted by
                    Hackthorne19
                     on October 25, 2009 at 1:35 AM
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                    So exciting my sequel is on the way good for you mistress of writing.
                
                
                
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                    Kabu
                     on October 24, 2009 at 7:34 PM
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                    PatB
                
                The advice from Azur was obviously helpful my friend, that's a heap of good dialogue
  
                
                    posted by
                    WileyJohn
                     on October 24, 2009 at 7:27 PM
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                I like your racy dialogue. Glad it's working for you again.
                
                    posted by
                    elinjo
                     on October 24, 2009 at 10:52 AM
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                Alright! I've been looking forward to reading the sequel to 
Zombies - so am real happy that you are doing this. Your sis sounds like she's a positive, upbeat person - and your idea of a funny card is the perfect thing. It was great reading back over your posts. That little town sounds much like the one where I brought up my children. One has to take hats off to the foresight of the founders of such places.  
                
                    posted by
                    adnohr
                     on October 24, 2009 at 6:49 AM
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