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I just love how you can wrap a story into the lines of your poetry....Add with it, the emoting of a myriad of emotions....You are just awesome!
posted by
Wigopa_
on October 20, 2009 at 7:00 PM
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I feel a sense of helplessness and sorrow when reading this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 20, 2009 at 6:40 PM
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Not an experience that I ever had but after reading this I believe I know
what it would be like. You have written so perfectly the heartbreak.
posted by
Kabu
on October 20, 2009 at 6:10 PM
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Wow! If this isn't the perfect rendition of being with the wrong one when the right one comes along! I thought this to be very poignant! The imagery just grabs the reader and holds on long after the poem is read! Now that is fine imagery for me! sammie loves you the Milky Way times 4 other galaxies! OOOH, love that one! I am battling a bit of depression since my son is on this crazy mission but I want to know how you are feeling, Sweetie? sammie
posted by
sam444
on October 20, 2009 at 4:43 PM
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nice work here
posted by
spiderfly
on October 20, 2009 at 1:13 PM
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Sinome
Sometimes Most of the time you don't have to be the "first" to be the bearer of all those gifts.....
posted by
Troosha
on October 20, 2009 at 9:42 AM
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Poignant and beautiful, as always!
posted by
Nita09
on October 20, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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That sounds like me when I was young and thought that I was in love with someone already taken.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 20, 2009 at 6:38 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on October 20, 2009 at 5:45 AM
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Beautiful and sad love poem. It was much in the style of lustorlove's poems. I actually re-checked to see that I was on your blog. :)
posted by
calia14
on October 20, 2009 at 1:19 AM
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so meaningful!
posted by
Star5_
on October 19, 2009 at 10:39 PM
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