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Today I saw a homeless man cheered up some, feeling a little more welcome. I like your poem.
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mariposa75
on October 18, 2009 at 6:31 PM
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A very kind wish to have.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 16, 2009 at 5:31 PM
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Re: you depict the scene(s) with such clarity
Thank you so much Lionreign..I'm glad you think that.
posted by
shobana
on October 15, 2009 at 3:21 PM
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Thank you so much Nita for liking the poem and your visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 15, 2009 at 3:20 PM
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you depict the scene(s) with such clarity
that with a few strokes of your verbal brush you show us the picture in your heart. Beautifully done
posted by
lionreign
on October 15, 2009 at 10:25 AM
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This is excellent! I love your compassion and perception, specially in the last few lines.
posted by
Nita09
on October 15, 2009 at 2:40 AM
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Hi Shamasehar, yes so true..I feel the same way too and you have captured what I was trying to say so well..the loner being people out there all alone. Thank you for the visit and comment.
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shobana
on October 15, 2009 at 2:14 AM
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Ah! beautiful words once again! Sometimes I feel the survival instinct is strongest in nature.....there are no artificial shelters to protect,hence the spirit to overcome all odds! I will go with you May peace prevail!
posted by
shamasehar
on October 15, 2009 at 2:12 AM
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Abanerjee - Hi, thanks so much for your lovely comments..always encouraging. Have a nice time reading.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 11:40 PM
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Lovely and most heartfelt poems you are contributing in creativity and with a magnetic appeal all its own. The last three lines wishing peace for the heart of a loner stand out with the beauty of the message. WoW, Shobana, WoW!
posted by
anib
on October 14, 2009 at 11:36 PM
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Hi Isis Eyes..thank you very much for the compliment..
and your visit. It's nice to see you here.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 10:54 PM
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Shobana, I am blown away. Your poem is powerful and lovely.
posted by
myrrhage_
on October 14, 2009 at 10:51 PM
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RomaKay - thanks so much for your visit and kind comment.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 10:44 PM
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Taps - I like the way you coined the words..thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 10:44 PM
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Hi Sweetie - Great that you are getting things organized again..I can imagine the task. You did say that you had a secretary though - even better. at least some work off your hands. Well your town must have gained something with you moving there! have a great time reading sweetie..love you too.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 10:43 PM
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Re: the ability of nature to fight back against allodds. What a lesson for
Absolutely true Kabu..glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 10:40 PM
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Thank you so much Merkie..just amazing isn't it..God's way of showing us things.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 10:40 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thanks so much Wiley John..for the visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2009 at 10:39 PM
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Shobana
You depicted he lonely man I once was so well, along with the rain and a long wait for the sun
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 14, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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We had a tremendous cloud burst in the summer with torrents of water and hail that battered the flowers with powerful stones. I thought we would lose the flowers but the next day they were standing tall and smiling into the sunshine. Amazing will to survive in everything! Your poem brought these scenes back vividly ! Words are a powerful communication to inspire. Well done Shobana!
posted by
merkie
on October 14, 2009 at 8:31 PM
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the ability of nature to fight back against allodds. What a lesson for
us all.I love the ending too darling. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on October 14, 2009 at 7:38 PM
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Such a fantastic poem my Shobana! I thought it had grand questioning and to wish peace to the loner, the one who needs it most, was an exquisite ending! I wish you peace and bring my blessings to you, too! I am getting things organized again! What a daunting task! I am doing it with a smile on my face and peace in my heart for it can be fixed over time! I hope this never happens to anyone else! I just learned that my town was attacked and the infection went rampant! I live in such a remote out of the way place that I can't imagine what they hoped to gain here, our population is only 211,000! Have a great day, too, Sweetie! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 14, 2009 at 4:49 PM
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A great piece of peace work.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 14, 2009 at 4:46 PM
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wow. gave me chills. amazing.
posted by
RomaKay
on October 14, 2009 at 4:42 PM
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Thank you for this! I adore dandelions...they don't quit. Even when people try to kill them, they'll still push up through the cement in your driveway. Anything that won't quit commands respect.
posted by
Darson
on October 14, 2009 at 4:00 PM
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sooooooooo goooooooood.
posted by
Star5_
on October 14, 2009 at 3:26 PM
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