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You touch my heart, always Sinome, but...this line (among others) just tugged at my very soul:
as if I were walking amongst tears,
sliding through eternity,
an embryo of G-d
swimming in the life giving waters of divine conception. Elyse
xoxo
posted by
elysianfields
on October 19, 2009 at 9:20 PM
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you are the undisputed queen of gorgeous melancholy
and this shows exactly why, love
posted by
lionreign
on October 16, 2009 at 7:21 AM
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I loved the idea of being home wherever one is! It was rather melancholy but I did adore the cleansing effect of the water! Excellent imagery for me! Love you Sweetie! sammie
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2009 at 6:11 AM
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Sadly beautiful, Sinome – although sometimes “alone” especially amidst the mist and the rain can be empowering (or at least I find it to be)
posted by
Troosha
on October 14, 2009 at 4:44 PM
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Ohhhh I just LOVE it when waves 'kiss' my feet...the perfect way to word it!
posted by
Darson
on October 14, 2009 at 4:02 PM
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And a lovely and comforting home it is
washed by the mists of time
Lovely writing, Marta!
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on October 14, 2009 at 12:21 PM
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I feel serenity reading this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 14, 2009 at 12:13 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on October 14, 2009 at 12:01 PM
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This is so beautiful I cannot read a poem of yours without seeing a certain someone of my past. Though the now is wonderful, and pleasing to me, I can't forget what the past meant to me before it withered on the vine.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 14, 2009 at 10:45 AM
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Very nice poem. Soon I'll see the ocean again.
posted by
vogue
on October 14, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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Excellent imagery
Thank you for sharing a beautiful poem. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 14, 2009 at 4:21 AM
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Sinome
This one is as fine as the cleansing waters of the rain. The sea and the rains are my loves.
posted by
anib
on October 13, 2009 at 11:10 PM
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so nice witing!
posted by
Star5_
on October 13, 2009 at 8:44 PM
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Sinome
All of your beautiful writing brings me back to a very sad time after my wife Joyce died. I walked the beaches alone on PEI and on the beach at Carpenteria, CA, and here you capture and express the feelings, emotions, surroundings, the very essence of what I lived in such terrible sadness. Now I live love again, hugging the reality of it in Kabu now and somehow we are all joined together in a mystical love that just seems to flow from you with such splendor. G-d Bless you and much,
from Kabu and me.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 13, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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This puts it so beautifully and cleverly the way I feel about the sea and
walking along the beach.
posted by
Kabu
on October 13, 2009 at 8:08 PM
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