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Sincere thanks to all my friends here! - hardilaziz
posted by
hardilaziz
on October 15, 2009 at 6:14 PM
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I find this a recurring theme in my own poems
as in in "Festival of Peace" in
The Washington Poems:
Or mocking eyes of soulless beauty
which can not stop their play to love?
You have struck a common nerve, my friend.
Well done!
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on October 15, 2009 at 5:08 AM
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Very nice - well said in just a few words. Are you always able to say so much in so few words? Maybe, too, it's because some of us can understand so easily what it is you're saying. As a writer, I think sometimes we are more sensitive - maybe more susceptible TO getting our hearts broke(?). Does this make any sense to you....very nice poem. Sad - nice:). -Sincerely -INAHA (Diana Evans)
posted by
Inaha
on October 15, 2009 at 4:47 AM
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This is powerful! Wow! It says so much in so few words! BRAVO!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2009 at 2:53 AM
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A very strong emotion there hardilaziz.
posted by
shobana
on October 15, 2009 at 2:05 AM
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a broken heart evokes strong emotion
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 15, 2009 at 12:35 AM
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Sirf baat itne hai yeh khilona toot kar judta nahin! nice one!
posted by
shamasehar
on October 15, 2009 at 12:31 AM
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too many people in this world think it and everything and everyone in it
is just a big toy, very true, hardliaziz...and if something or someone or gets broken sweep up the pieces and by me new...wow, this one has quite the impact....
posted by
Rumor
on October 14, 2009 at 11:59 AM
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Heartfelt words. Thanks for your kind comment.
posted by
Nita09
on October 14, 2009 at 9:41 AM
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this portrays real deep hurt.
posted by
Kabu
on October 13, 2009 at 3:06 PM
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Ouch
this one feels as if it is spoken from the depths of pain
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:28 AM
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