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I continue to be impressed with your cliffhangers! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 14, 2009 at 9:24 PM
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Next instalment is up, dealing with, ehhhh, clothes! This is such fun!
posted by
vogue
on October 13, 2009 at 5:25 AM
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This story is moving right along.
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on October 13, 2009 at 5:20 AM
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You have done it now, you know. A short story is in the making. Title: How Aktium was
really lost.
Guess it was hot that day in Egypt!
posted by
vogue
on October 13, 2009 at 2:37 AM
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Re: oops, brilliant
posted by
anib
on October 13, 2009 at 12:55 AM
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A very absorbing brillaint piece
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posted by
anib
on October 13, 2009 at 12:52 AM
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Excellent Ian! The ominous politeness and veiled threats at the Gestapo HQ suspense, that had me sitting on the edge of my chair sweating.
Probably because I tend to be too politically correct, it jars on my sensibilities when I read words like 'kraut' and 'limey', but no doubt this is part of the jargon that people used at the time.
posted by
elinjo
on October 13, 2009 at 12:36 AM
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Hallo, kindred spirit in the historical figures dialogue department. Do you think Marc Anthony's fishing rod was diamond encrusted? She might have screamed: "So that's where they went. I was looking for the damned things everywhere!"
posted by
vogue
on October 12, 2009 at 11:42 PM
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