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How striking to see one half of the soul! Stunning, sweetie! I come to see how you are doing and then I find myself three days behind folks I like to read! What a mess but I am over it and attending to the details of putting it back together again! I think it has a chance to be better than before! Have a great day, Sweetie! Love you more than all the info that got lost to cyper space! lol sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2009 at 6:09 AM
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I love October mornings.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 13, 2009 at 7:49 PM
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Sinome
A great autumnal poem. Up here it feels more like winter - where is all that 'global warming' taking place?
posted by
Nautikos
on October 13, 2009 at 7:43 PM
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Separation
" that mystical line where the sun , the stars and the moon go to hide"xoxox
posted by
anib
on October 13, 2009 at 10:54 AM
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It certainly is crisp and breezy here. It feels more like end of November weather than middle of October. Beautiful rendering a an autumn poem you have here.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 13, 2009 at 8:12 AM
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Gorgeous beyond words my friend
I love the almost wistful tone of this poem, it's gentle romance of the spirit is just enchanting.
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 8:12 AM
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Just before you can feel the breeze here if I open the door to my apartment for something. The horizon at sunset looks spectacular these days around here love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 12, 2009 at 9:13 PM
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yes I agree very beautiful and yes it is nearly winter here too.
posted by
Kabu
on October 12, 2009 at 8:37 PM
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~ you had me at the end line ~ soooo gorgeous and the last words just made my heart beat - beat - beat ~ aww
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 12, 2009 at 8:03 PM
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So beautiful, tranquil, divine. To me today felt much like winter too, I swear I could smell snow. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 12, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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this is cool!
posted by
Star5_
on October 12, 2009 at 6:20 PM
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Sinome
A very beautiful poem as all you write is. Now please educate me if you don't mind, Why do you leave the 'o' out of God? What do I not understand?
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 12, 2009 at 6:12 PM
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