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Re: TAPS
Thank you! I am delighted you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 8:14 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you for coming to share with me
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 8:12 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you sweetie, there have been times when the season has got to me for a moment, but it never lasts for long - life is too awsome to be unhappy for too long
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:59 AM
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Re: Nileangel
Except for when they are right over head! Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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You certainly have a way about you when it comes to writing poetry.
Quite fascinating. I loved the ending.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 13, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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Re: nice one as usual!
Thanks Sue!!!
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:50 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you
I used to be a cynic and a pessimist and I'd insist that I was a realist, these days I AM a realist (although people accuse me of be a romantic and an optimist)
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:43 AM
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Re: Sam444
Very much so, I am glad you enjoyed this one - I had a feeling that this might appeal to you
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:38 AM
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Re: tHIS IS SO CHEERFUL i AM SMILING AS i READ IT 3 TIMES.
Thanks Kabu - a smile is the greatest result I could ask for from a poem such as this
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:29 AM
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Re: hardilaziz
there is, all we need to do is notice it
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:26 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you so much, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:20 AM
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Re: I really like the images you use
thanks, Ciel, I love to hear that things I write stick with people - it makes me feel like I have been somehow more effective in my writing.
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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Re: BC-A
I think the best thing about English weather is that we do get a lot of rainbows, I think they are the cheeriest thing you can possibly see on a rainy day
posted by
lionreign
on October 13, 2009 at 7:11 AM
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Step into tomorrow with a beautiful rainbow. Very positive thinking
thank you for sharing and thanks for your comments
Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 12, 2009 at 8:42 PM
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You are the eternal optimist :-) Such an uplifting read... though I must confess at the beginning of it I thought the cold rainny autumn had gotten to you. I am happy to have been wrong :-) Gawd I love to read you!
posted by
Sinome
on October 12, 2009 at 8:07 PM
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Always a rainbow just around the corner. Nice write. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 12, 2009 at 7:57 PM
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nice one as usual!
posted by
Star5_
on October 12, 2009 at 5:54 PM
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It's lovely to look at the bright side of things..I do that most times when I'm down. Great poem Lionreign.
posted by
shobana
on October 12, 2009 at 3:49 PM
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It is so uncomfortable to be incomplete but the imagery gives great impetus to affirmation and belief in a new day! I loved the words choice and placement, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 12, 2009 at 2:20 PM
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tHIS IS SO CHEERFUL i AM SMILING AS i READ IT 3 TIMES.
posted by
Kabu
on October 12, 2009 at 12:43 PM
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There is always a ray of hope!
posted by
hardilaziz
on October 12, 2009 at 10:09 AM
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Thanks for sharing the promise of the rainbow. So uplifting. Great imagery and use of words. I love your poetry!
posted by
merkie
on October 12, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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I really like the images you use
especially in the first lines...
brazen husks of opportunities... Now, that's gonna stick in my mind!
posted by
Ciel
on October 12, 2009 at 7:56 AM
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Seeing a rainbow’s a cheery sight. When you feel happy after having been down it’s like seeing a rainbow after the rain. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 12, 2009 at 7:08 AM
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