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Aspire - thanks so much and am glad you liked the poem. have a nice weekend.
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shobana
on October 10, 2009 at 10:12 PM
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Hi Sinome, thank you so much. Hope you are feeling better now and good to see you back and blogging.
posted by
shobana
on October 10, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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Nautikos - Yes it is somewhat..and I like how you said it. Thank you so much for your visit and comment.
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shobana
on October 10, 2009 at 10:10 PM
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It went splendid Sam..thanks so much sweetie and mostly the wine is the lure for them..lol.
posted by
shobana
on October 10, 2009 at 10:09 PM
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Thank you so much Hardilaziz for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 10, 2009 at 10:08 PM
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I agree with almost everyone - it is sadly true, but excellent write, Shobana, kudos, I can literally
feel that poem.
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on October 10, 2009 at 10:28 AM
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So well expressed Shobana... Sadly beautiful xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 10, 2009 at 9:28 AM
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Shobana
A beautiful reminder of the sad reality that
everything is but a wind-blown writing in sand...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 10, 2009 at 7:27 AM
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Kudos!
posted by
hardilaziz
on October 9, 2009 at 10:50 PM
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I hope first communion goes well. I remember when mine took theirs, the smirk after the wine was so cute! Thanks for stopping in to see me! It meant a great deal deal to me! Enjoy this very special day my darlin' Shobana! Love you dearly, your sam
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sam444
on October 9, 2009 at 7:48 PM
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Shamasehar - thank you so much for your visit and kind comment. have a nice weekend.
posted by
shobana
on October 9, 2009 at 7:21 PM
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Re: beautiful but sad yes so often what starts out with such joy doesn't last
Kabu darling - I read you earlier..just did not leave a message. thanks so much for the visit and have a lovely thanksgiving my Kabu.
posted by
shobana
on October 9, 2009 at 7:06 PM
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So sorry, I thought this was excellent imagery, too!
posted by
sam444
on October 9, 2009 at 5:37 PM
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I miss you so when the weekend approaches! See you Monday my sweet Shobana! your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 9, 2009 at 5:36 PM
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beautiful but sad yes so often what starts out with such joy doesn't last
forever.
posted by
Kabu
on October 9, 2009 at 8:17 AM
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This is so evocative and the imagery is so clear
It is astonishingly good
posted by
lionreign
on October 9, 2009 at 7:25 AM
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Shobana
Ahh... those moments; moments to truly treasure
posted by
Troosha
on October 9, 2009 at 6:06 AM
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Wishing you a happy weekend too.
posted by
elinjo
on October 9, 2009 at 5:29 AM
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Sad but true.......such tender & beautiful promises are washed away! Done very well& the close was the last straw!
posted by
shamasehar
on October 8, 2009 at 10:04 PM
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Thank you so much for that lovely comment Elyse. God bless.
posted by
shobana
on October 8, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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Thank you Chuck and have a lovely weekend.
posted by
shobana
on October 8, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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Wiley John, hi..Is it the Canadian thanksgiving day there today?? Here's wishing you and Kabu a lovely thanksgiving too my darlings..and eat some of the delicious food Kabu will cook up for me too..please!!
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shobana
on October 8, 2009 at 8:53 PM
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Shobana
Lovely and you have a Happy Canadian Thanksgiving luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 8, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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"With the heart beats talking for lack of words" splendid line shobana . pensive end - where does it all go?I hope you have a good weekend too!
posted by
merkie
on October 8, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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aww this absolutely tugged at my heart ~ so many images and such fullness of vision - the ending is beautiful- sad but truly beautiful. Poignant Poem ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 8, 2009 at 6:25 PM
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Every love relation has it's own story to tell !!
Thank you for sharing. Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 8, 2009 at 5:45 PM
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I'm experiencing that very love. I hope it never goes away. Beautiful write.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 8, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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if it meant to be, it stay forever, if it for the moment, it goes away
after the moment, after all we are human, who doesn't have control over nothing in life......
posted by
Star5_
on October 8, 2009 at 4:14 PM
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Thank you so much..they do as you say. have a lovely evening dear Taps.
posted by
shobana
on October 8, 2009 at 4:13 PM
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Very beautiful and sad and far too often exactly what happens to love.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 8, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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The last stanza makes me feel so sad. I wonder how many heartfelt messages have been washed away.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 8, 2009 at 3:59 PM
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