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This is outstanding..merkie. It is so thoughtful of you to write this poem. Amidst all of that we have to come to terms and stand tall. (Have you been reading my poems all three at one go??
Oh Gosh..am humbled dear merkie. have a wonderful weekend too.
posted by
shobana
on October 8, 2009 at 8:59 PM
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Outstanding possitivity
This is just superb - well written, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on October 8, 2009 at 8:37 AM
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I'm standing, I'm standing.... thanks for your condolences.
posted by
Troosha
on October 8, 2009 at 7:56 AM
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Merkie - Don't we all love positive attitude. We are as good as our thinking
Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 8, 2009 at 5:04 AM
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Realy good timing merkie--thank you. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 8, 2009 at 3:58 AM
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It is positive, but I find alot of your poetry ends either on a positive note, or with the promise of eventual hope...even when it touched sadness. I still wonder why it isn't published. It's just so beautiful.
posted by
adnohr
on October 7, 2009 at 7:32 PM
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Re: 9star Thanks Sue!
posted by
merkie
on October 7, 2009 at 1:08 PM
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Re:
Hey Vicky It is the 21 syllables in the last line tha is hard to keep a handle on.LOL I seem to count and recount 1234567 aaaahhahhhah Like the Count on sesame street!
posted by
merkie
on October 7, 2009 at 1:07 PM
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Re: Grat I have copied this if you don't minf for I need it today. You darlin'
's too Kabu! XxxOOOO
posted by
merkie
on October 7, 2009 at 1:06 PM
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Grat I have copied this if you don't minf for I need it today. You darlin'
posted by
Kabu
on October 7, 2009 at 11:44 AM
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Nice one Merkie, positive action, and prayer always help to lift the weight.
This would be a fun style of poetry to try sometime.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 7, 2009 at 10:13 AM
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Nice one Merkie, positive action, and prayer always help to lift the weight.
This would be a fun style of poetry to try sometime.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 7, 2009 at 10:13 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 7, 2009 at 9:30 AM
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