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Re: Merkie
Thank you, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on October 2, 2009 at 7:55 AM
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You go from the physical to the serenade of love with such finesse...
tender and most loving ....
posted by
merkie
on October 1, 2009 at 9:07 PM
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Re: Simone
Thank you, dear, I was very much in the right mood to write when I penned this one
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 7:24 AM
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Re: lion, you are so romantic!
guilty... and I am not ashamed of it either
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 7:22 AM
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Re: shobana
thanks - glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 7:16 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 7:08 AM
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Re: Sam444
That's because I wrote the line so it can be read both ways - I couldn't decide which meaning to use there so I picked a word that can mean either one
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 6:56 AM
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Re: hardilaziz
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 6:53 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks, I always feel pleased when my writing can remind somebody of something good
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 6:45 AM
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Re: Elyse
Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed this one, I do love to bring my poetry back to a more earthy mode after it flies a little high
posted by
lionreign
on October 1, 2009 at 6:37 AM
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Wow... Sensual and ever so HOT! but still romantic... you can't help that :-) Fabulous poem Lion! xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 30, 2009 at 7:44 PM
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lion, you are so romantic!
posted by
Star5_
on September 30, 2009 at 6:10 PM
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Lionreign - Quite sensual and really gets the romance going..lovely.
posted by
shobana
on September 30, 2009 at 4:26 PM
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Quite fantastic!
posted by
TAPS.
on September 30, 2009 at 1:44 PM
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I couldn't decide if esurient was hungry or greedy in the line! But the close was perfect rendition of burning love! It served to accentuate the fire throughout the power! A serenade is so poignant and of the heart is even more special! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 30, 2009 at 1:15 PM
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Skillfully crafted piece!
posted by
hardilaziz
on September 30, 2009 at 9:14 AM
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This reminds me of a song I’m so into You. However your poem’s more sensuous. Excellent! BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on September 30, 2009 at 7:57 AM
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Love this poem...and so enjoy the vivid imagery and metaphor ~ esurient (yum) ---Truly, this reaches a heart ~ It's Gold
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 30, 2009 at 7:44 AM
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