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I can sense sadness.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 29, 2009 at 5:15 PM
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That's simply great news darling Sam..you must be so relieved. I am for you too. Love you tons too!!
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shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:39 PM
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Deep in the written, indeed! This one exudes reaching deep into your own soul to capture the best imagery possible! Wonderfully constructed! BTW, the sale of my house was finalized today! It is officially over! So relieved! Love you, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 29, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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Rector - thank you for the visit and yes it somewhat is.
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shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:30 PM
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Re: Such a tragic tale
Lionreign - thank you so much..I'm glad you think so...
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shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:29 PM
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Aspire - thank you so much..I am kinda simple too.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:28 PM
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Hi Nita..thanks so much for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:27 PM
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Vogue - thank you so much for your visit and yes it is somewhat.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:26 PM
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Abanerjee - thank you so much for that kind comment and visit.
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shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:25 PM
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Adnohr - how nice of you to say that..thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment..I love those kids too.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2009 at 4:25 PM
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As Vogue and Snowview say, so poignant, moving and sad.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on September 29, 2009 at 9:09 AM
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Such a tragic tale
And so realistic too (sadly) beautifully written!
posted by
lionreign
on September 29, 2009 at 7:12 AM
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Again, Shobana, your poetry is always very simple to the eyes yet beautiful to read
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on September 29, 2009 at 6:20 AM
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Very poignant!
posted by
Nita09
on September 29, 2009 at 4:11 AM
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Very moving and so sad.
posted by
vogue
on September 29, 2009 at 12:20 AM
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shobana
Your poems have a deep and so immediate an appeal for the heart; they elevate
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posted by
anib
on September 28, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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Shobana - your poem reminds me of my kids living in the streets...their eyes tell the same story. This poem is so
there! Well done. (I've read back in your blog - you are very good!)
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adnohr
on September 28, 2009 at 8:50 PM
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Elyse - thank you so much..yes it does seem that way.
posted by
shobana
on September 28, 2009 at 7:56 PM
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oh Shobana, how very moving ~ so deeply, from the heart ~ poignant...Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 28, 2009 at 7:50 PM
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Very well expressed.
posted by
Nileangel
on September 28, 2009 at 6:44 PM
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I love your deep vision
and I love your writings
Keep them coming. Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 28, 2009 at 6:25 PM
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MY SWEET FRIEND WITH THE BRILLIANT PEN
OR KEYBOARD THESE DAYS I SUPPOSE.HI. LOVE.
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Kabu
on September 28, 2009 at 5:01 PM
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Good Morning BCA - thank you so much and I'm so glad you saw it that way..I will be back to read a little later...
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shobana
on September 28, 2009 at 4:54 PM
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I’d call this a coming of age poem. It grows on you as you read it love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst 
posted by
BC-A
on September 28, 2009 at 4:47 PM
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