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It is time for more of this wonderful writing.
posted by
Justi
on October 5, 2009 at 11:28 AM
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'don't say you love me when you hate me with your eyes...'
---wow that is some powerful stuff. Good writing.
posted by
Darson
on October 2, 2009 at 8:09 PM
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Keep these Words of Wisdom coming.
posted by
Justi
on September 26, 2009 at 7:39 PM
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I'm not your Mona Lisa, eh?
JAah you write from the side of the subject in love songs that use paintings as allegories. BC-A, Bill’s RoostJ
posted by
BC-A
on September 24, 2009 at 6:54 PM
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who can hate you .....
posted by
Star5_
on September 23, 2009 at 8:34 PM
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What coursing statements of passionate images you speak of here! Both chills and wonder live in your words!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 23, 2009 at 7:55 PM
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RITE2SPIN THIS IS A TOTAL YES, YES AND YES! Sorry for the upper case letters. I am yelling to the world, this is truly good stuff. Good writing but more than that it is good mode to live by. God bless you! e mail me when you have time and bring me up to date on where you are in your work. You can e mail from here until about the 4 or 5 of October. George sends his best wishes and God's blessings. He loves your work as much as I, it is fantastic.
posted by
Justi
on September 23, 2009 at 5:24 PM
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I like the conclusions and the affirmation at the end! This line was very striking for me:
don't say you love me when you hate me with your eyes Well done, indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 23, 2009 at 10:49 AM
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Each of us is unique .Exc cellent poem Nathan.
posted by
merkie
on September 23, 2009 at 9:07 AM
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Very strong message
I love your poem. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 23, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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