Go to Shobana
- Add a comment
- Go to When the sky turns crimson..
Re:
Sam - thank you so much..and ok I will. You are not in my corner but forefront.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 7:16 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Snowview - thank you Nita for your kind comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 7:15 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Chuck - thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 7:14 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Shamasehar - thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 7:13 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Ryan Morrow - thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 7:12 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Mariposa - thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 7:12 PM
| link to this | reply
Beautiful!
posted by
mariposa75
on September 23, 2009 at 10:32 AM
| link to this | reply
Angels seemed to dance above when I read this aloud! Beautiful!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 23, 2009 at 10:27 AM
| link to this | reply
Your wings of imagination touch the sky with this poem!
posted by
shamasehar
on September 23, 2009 at 10:22 AM
| link to this | reply
You have such a vivid imagination
and your poems are getting nicer and nicer
Chuck!
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 23, 2009 at 7:52 AM
| link to this | reply
Fantastic use of vivid colors! Thanks for your kind comment! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on September 23, 2009 at 6:01 AM
| link to this | reply
Hello my Shobana, I was perusing your comments and see, I was right! I am so glad you had tears of joy for it is a most wonderful time for you and please enjoy as you seek to complete your goals! I love you, too! This poem is fabulous and the use of color was brilliant! sam
I'm in your corner, if I can help just let me know, I'm here for you!!!!!
posted by
sam444
on September 23, 2009 at 2:13 AM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Elinjo - thank you so much for your visit and kind comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 23, 2009 at 12:43 AM
| link to this | reply
You write such sensitive poetry, thank you for sharing it!
posted by
elinjo
on September 23, 2009 at 12:19 AM
| link to this | reply
A Wow Wow is a WoWZeR, hahaha
posted by
anib
on September 22, 2009 at 11:24 PM
| link to this | reply
Re:
Abanerjee - Oh dear..lol. thank you for WowZer(?) !!
posted by
shobana
on September 22, 2009 at 11:20 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: True poetry here...
Ciel - l thank you so much..am honored by your visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 22, 2009 at 11:19 PM
| link to this | reply
True poetry here...
and I don't say that to everyone!
posted by
Ciel
on September 22, 2009 at 11:16 PM
| link to this | reply
This is so wonderful Shobs. I so so so very loved, when you take the crimson off, what do you find ... Blue ... and when you take that off too, White, purity, awareness. Simply remarkable, the deeper nuances. Here,s a WoWZeR!!! for your fabulous work
*+++
.
posted by
anib
on September 22, 2009 at 11:11 PM
| link to this | reply
Dark and lovely!
posted by
hardilaziz
on September 22, 2009 at 9:28 PM
| link to this | reply
very tricky with the colors
posted by
Lanetay
on September 22, 2009 at 9:21 PM
| link to this | reply
I agree with Elyse and with Sammie's previous comment... You have grown tremendously as a poet and this poem is a great example of your limitless gift. Bravo my froiend... Excellent work
xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 22, 2009 at 8:09 PM
| link to this | reply
Wow love this song of praise! Thank you Shobana
posted by
merkie
on September 22, 2009 at 4:55 PM
| link to this | reply
Such vivid imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 22, 2009 at 4:30 PM
| link to this | reply
can you say, Gorgeous...this is stunning.
~Allelluia!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 22, 2009 at 4:11 PM
| link to this | reply