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posted by
johnmacnab
on September 23, 2009 at 6:28 AM
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Pat
Beautiful, Pat. I've been on the same elevator but I'm sure it sank further than the basement.
posted by
johnmacnab
on September 23, 2009 at 6:27 AM
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HAHAHA. Yes. I see a specific face, hard body, golden tousled hair, from out of the past, and I can still feel those same feelings.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 22, 2009 at 9:39 PM
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Pat
This is simply very, very good! There's a whole phase of someone's life imbeddded in this scene, much daydreaming and maybe even sighs and sleepless nights...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 22, 2009 at 5:46 PM
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Hm yes, been there too! I loved the last lines that expressed the sinking feeling.
posted by
elinjo
on September 22, 2009 at 12:51 PM
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I love this!
posted by
bitchbrew9
on September 22, 2009 at 6:43 AM
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I think we've all been there. You've got the feeling down pat in this poem, Pat-B, LOL.
posted by
adnohr
on September 22, 2009 at 5:17 AM
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Great poem!
'To loosen the fools tongue.' It's almost medieval....
posted by
Antipodean
on September 22, 2009 at 4:57 AM
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