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"Never again." Such sad words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 22, 2009 at 4:31 PM
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Sadness will stay...happiness comes and goes!
posted by
hardilaziz
on September 22, 2009 at 9:57 AM
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Sinome, very heartfelt and touching...anyone who can't feel your poetry
must be half dead already..
...
posted by
Rumor
on September 21, 2009 at 8:10 PM
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The times pass and more to come...a walk in the valley of wonder this was!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 21, 2009 at 7:02 PM
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Remember the good times and be thankful for the time that you had. Some never know love.
Beautiful writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 21, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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Sinome - I truly hope the sadness will go away..A beautiful poignant poem.
posted by
shobana
on September 21, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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Flows so beautifully, as always! Thanks very much indeed for your warm comment on my (September) post--really thoughtful of you to remember my son Ashish. I will be going on the 24th to visit him---do continue to keep him in your prayers. Love and blessings. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on September 21, 2009 at 10:50 AM
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how sad as the leaves begin to fall
posted by
Lanetay
on September 21, 2009 at 8:59 AM
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Oh...this touches
as always your poetry just touches a heart, a soul. I am reminded of the tune, Autumn Leaves (one of my favorites) and the whole imagery coming forth is such a reminder ~ melancholy and dear -
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 21, 2009 at 7:40 AM
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Bleak
and makes one look forward to spring!
posted by
malcolm
on September 21, 2009 at 5:44 AM
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This is very awesome imagery! I enjoyed the cadence as it took me through such expressive imagery! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on September 21, 2009 at 5:28 AM
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Sinome ~.~
A deeply moving piece that squeezes a tear from the heart...so beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on September 21, 2009 at 1:39 AM
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sad ...but very pretty......
posted by
Star5_
on September 20, 2009 at 9:21 PM
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