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thunder is spooky especially when you are not use to it
posted by
Lanetay
on September 21, 2009 at 9:01 AM
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The heart is resilient.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 18, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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Amazing read the same as the tears rinse the soul, up lifting
posted by
Mystereo
on September 18, 2009 at 2:49 PM
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There is a crescendo of emotion that crashes with the thunder's roll and splashes the raindrops to soothe .... Beauty- Marta Excellent poem.
posted by
merkie
on September 18, 2009 at 8:32 AM
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Great writing confirms it love. BC-A, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink
posted by
BC-A
on September 18, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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...jumping through my pen onto the blank page...
So many things suddenly make one feel the need to write something down.
Love this poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 18, 2009 at 6:23 AM
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Very nice poem
For me the thunder reminds me in the presence of God. It is a warning of his power, but after it comes the rain, and that is the blessing that was given to man. Like always I love your writings !!!
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 18, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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Sinome - I like how the rain cleanses and washes aways all the fears..a beautiful poem.
posted by
shobana
on September 18, 2009 at 12:06 AM
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Sinome
The insides of your soul pouring itself out on a blank page, the page bearing its weight, and then the pure waters of the rain, with which all began with its distant thunder, washing it all away, completing the cycle! W O N D Er F U L L!!
posted by
anib
on September 17, 2009 at 9:37 PM
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rain washes pain away!
posted by
Star5_
on September 17, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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PLEASE CHECK YOUR MAIL, NJ WAS WORRIED ABOUT YOU, PLEASE
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posted by
Star5_
on September 17, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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