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Well done, I am glad your little son will gain the benefit you pass along from your Dad. PRecious traditons to follow.
posted by
merkie
on September 19, 2009 at 10:43 AM
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Very well done conveying the message so effectively.
posted by
anib
on September 16, 2009 at 10:49 PM
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Needs a little revising, but, otherwise, an amazing father and son journey with a wonderful message!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 16, 2009 at 10:04 PM
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You had one special father! Well told and very illustrative imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 16, 2009 at 3:10 PM
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Oh such a lovely poem. Daddy wasn't bad just broken. But only through broken pots can the light shine. It is easy to see he loved his 'little man'. I love the heart you put into your work. God bless you.
posted by
Justi
on September 16, 2009 at 12:46 AM
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Great advice as far as I see!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 15, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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