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Thank you yellowrose for your kind comment and visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 16, 2009 at 9:25 PM
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Brilliantly written..touches on the core of real human darkness, and begs to shed the light.
posted by
yellowrose55
on September 16, 2009 at 8:43 PM
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You hit it home with all the harm that has been done. You wrote it in such a profound way. I can't wait for the day where these tainting acts are just a thing of the past. I do believe this will be. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on September 15, 2009 at 10:04 PM
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Elinjo - thank you so much..am so glad you think so.
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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Sam - love you too..thanks so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2009 at 7:30 PM
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Retired - thanks so much for your visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2009 at 7:29 PM
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Re: Shobana, this is very thought provoking indeed...the earth certainly has
Rumor - yes it has, thank you so much for your kind comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2009 at 7:28 PM
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Re: Shobana
Troosha - thank you so much...
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2009 at 7:27 PM
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Shamasehar - thank you and at the rate things are going..I don't think much!
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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Calia - thank you..yes that's true.
posted by
shobana
on September 15, 2009 at 7:25 PM
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That is stunning Shobana!
posted by
elinjo
on September 15, 2009 at 12:27 PM
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Right on! Where do we go from here indeed! What astounding imagery! I thought the cadence heightened the suspense of it all! Wonderful! sam {Love you, too}
posted by
sam444
on September 15, 2009 at 12:15 PM
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Whoa! This really hits hard - and is absolutely on the nail.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on September 15, 2009 at 11:18 AM
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Shobana, this is very thought provoking indeed...the earth certainly has
been tainted in color by too may tragedies, personal or world-wide..
...
posted by
Rumor
on September 15, 2009 at 10:00 AM
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Shobana
A full
right hook in this poem!
posted by
Troosha
on September 15, 2009 at 9:29 AM
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Great work! Yes the question looms large.................what do we leave behind?
posted by
shamasehar
on September 15, 2009 at 12:24 AM
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such pain and suffering.
posted by
calia14
on September 14, 2009 at 11:00 PM
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Re: Shobs,
Abanerjee - thank you so much for that lovely comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 14, 2009 at 9:45 PM
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Re: Shobs, oops, men, poetess.
posted by
anib
on September 14, 2009 at 9:44 PM
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Shobs,
This is an astoundingly philosophical musing in poetry of a loving, caring heart. It strikes the reader with a force that will leave them full of awe and wonder at the impossibility of a paint in taint that we man have made this earth to be. Kudos, you fine oetess!
posted by
anib
on September 14, 2009 at 9:43 PM
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Encore!!! By far the best piece I've had the pleasure of laying eyes on today! This is right up my alley of dark and demented musings about the state of the world! Gave me chills along my spine and yet I grinned with delight!
posted by
Ryan_Morrow
on September 14, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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So much strife there is in the world.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 14, 2009 at 5:49 PM
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Shobona
A tender pleading poem.
posted by
Justi
on September 14, 2009 at 5:14 PM
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Re: very nice.
9star - thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 14, 2009 at 4:38 PM
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very nice.
posted by
Star5_
on September 14, 2009 at 4:13 PM
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