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Re: Nicely said...
Aspire2inspire - thank you and yes that verse was supposed to take you down memory lane.
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shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:29 AM
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Nautikos - that's wonderful..nice to know you went down memory lane..maybe someday you tell us about it? thank you for the visit.
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shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:28 AM
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Ruby - thank you and I really hope you will.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:26 AM
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Snowview - Thanks so much Nita.
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shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:25 AM
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Troosha - Thank you and yes always a question to us. I'm 100% sure it will for you.
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shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:25 AM
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BCA - thank you and I am glad you did.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:23 AM
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Shamasehar - Thank you so much and yes I think so too.
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shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:23 AM
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Retired - thank you and glad you felt it.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:20 AM
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Lustorlove - thank you.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:19 AM
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Merkie - Glad you found it romantic. thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:18 AM
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Thank you Doug..God Bless you too.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:17 AM
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Vogue - thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:16 AM
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FSI - thank you and yes I think so too.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:15 AM
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Passion is a great force, it can move mountains..........your poem reflects its power!
posted by
shamasehar
on September 6, 2009 at 1:15 AM
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Thank you My Sam. I am glad you liked it.
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shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:15 AM
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SoulBuilder - And did I say you have something wise to say everytime?? Lata Mangeshkar..what a super talented wonderful singer. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2009 at 1:14 AM
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Though you asked the important questions....in this material world, it doesn't last. Lata Mangeshkar...probably the world's greatest female singer...was hurt but she girded her loins and made so many happy. She discovered her role!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 5, 2009 at 9:11 PM
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My Shobana, this is a very wonderfully written poem! Such congruity and potent imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 5, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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Well said. Love can feel both exciting but also painful at the same time.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 5, 2009 at 5:01 PM
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A lovely, lovely poem.
posted by
vogue
on September 4, 2009 at 11:44 PM
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Very nice imagery!
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
on September 4, 2009 at 10:16 PM
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I like the palm kissing and gentle brush of the hair to see her better. So romantic!
posted by
merkie
on September 4, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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great passion
posted by
Lanetay
on September 4, 2009 at 7:20 PM
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Lovely poem. Made me tremble when I read that bit about kissing her palm....
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on September 4, 2009 at 12:37 PM
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I feel the passion in this poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on September 4, 2009 at 8:53 AM
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Shobana
“Will it last forever”….. a question we all ask ourselves. Hopefully it does.
posted by
Troosha
on September 4, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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Very romantic and beautiful; thanks! Thanks too for stopping by! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on September 4, 2009 at 7:23 AM
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I loved this! I dream of having a moment like that :)
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ruby14
on September 4, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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Shobana
Lovely! It brings back memories of my own...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 4, 2009 at 7:09 AM
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Nicely said...
I especially liked the second verse (right, verse? I'm not a poetry person and I kinda forgot poetry terms), the one that starts with "he kissed her palm..."
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on September 4, 2009 at 4:57 AM
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Elinjo - Thank you very much for your lovely comment and you are most welcome.
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shobana
on September 4, 2009 at 1:15 AM
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Justi - thank you so much. am glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on September 4, 2009 at 1:14 AM
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This is a sensitive and very passionate poem. You write wonderful love poems. Thank you for visiting my blog yesterday.
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elinjo
on September 4, 2009 at 12:56 AM
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Shobana
This is such a lovely scene between two young lovers. Nice and very well done.
posted by
Justi
on September 4, 2009 at 12:38 AM
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Thank you so much Taps - so glad you think so.
posted by
shobana
on September 3, 2009 at 10:46 PM
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You have quite a talent for love poems.
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TAPS.
on September 3, 2009 at 10:43 PM
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Nileangel - thank you and glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on September 3, 2009 at 10:39 PM
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Re: A passionate desire is an ache at times for the lost one's.......you said
9star - thank you for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on September 3, 2009 at 10:38 PM
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My body felt thee passion in the words, beautiful, thankyou.
posted by
Nileangel
on September 3, 2009 at 9:31 PM
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A passionate desire is an ache at times for the lost one's.......you said
it all in a nice way......
posted by
Star5_
on September 3, 2009 at 9:17 PM
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Soulspeaker - thank you so much. Am so glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on September 3, 2009 at 8:28 PM
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Shobana ~.~
"...a story to tell...a passionate desire." -- a beautiful poem. Very well done, my friend. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
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soulspeaker
on September 3, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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