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Now that is a fine poem of fulfillment! WOW! and KUDOS!!! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on September 3, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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Merkie - so true..thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 2, 2009 at 6:55 PM
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Re: shobana, nicely done with that surprise ending....
Rumor - thank you so much. glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on September 2, 2009 at 6:55 PM
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Retired - thank you so much and you're welcome.
posted by
shobana
on September 2, 2009 at 6:54 PM
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Re: Shobana
Abanerjee - thank you.
posted by
shobana
on September 2, 2009 at 6:53 PM
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The moon is truly the lover's friend
posted by
merkie
on September 2, 2009 at 10:49 AM
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shobana, nicely done with that surprise ending....
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posted by
Rumor
on September 2, 2009 at 10:45 AM
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A beautiful poem and so beautifully expressed. Thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on September 2, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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Shobana
Very, very beautifully poetic, expressed so well by "Where were you ... ?"
posted by
anib
on September 2, 2009 at 7:54 AM
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Chuck - Thank you so much and you're most welcome.
posted by
shobana
on September 2, 2009 at 1:35 AM
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"Where were you yesterday when I needed you". I love the repetition of this sentence. How many times this sentence was repeated by different lovers who are questioning the strength of their relationships? Thank you for sharing this nice and soft poem, and thanks for your beautiful comments. Chuck
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 1, 2009 at 10:20 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on September 1, 2009 at 9:13 PM
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Re: It's simply beautiful and so well written .
Afzal - thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on September 1, 2009 at 8:24 PM
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It's simply beautiful and so well written .
posted by
afzal50
on September 1, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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FSI - thanks so much for your comments on all three of my poems.
posted by
shobana
on September 1, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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Such is love.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 1, 2009 at 7:15 PM
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Re: Wow!
Thank you darling Justi. Have a lovely evening?
posted by
shobana
on September 1, 2009 at 3:59 PM
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Wow!
That is visual, romantic and pretty.
posted by
Justi
on September 1, 2009 at 3:51 PM
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