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RITE2SPIN:
i would love to hear this one. Make a You tube and post it. Be blessed.

posted by Justi on September 2, 2009 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

 You’re ready for STAR and WORD FM love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on August 16, 2009 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

People are tried beyond messure these days!

posted by merkie on August 16, 2009 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

And here's also to the people

who strive to keep

the core values of democracy

alive in the US!

 

posted by Straightforward on August 16, 2009 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply

A great song I think..

posted by shobana on August 16, 2009 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

What a strong poem!  I agree with Rafael, it does have a rhythm that should be set to music. 

posted by calia14 on August 16, 2009 at 1:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re:
you know what I mean or at least I hope you do.

posted by RITE2SPIN on August 15, 2009 at 3:09 PM | link to this | reply

Rite to Spin
My husband said yoo-hoo that is some more of a song. He just finished another too. You guys are on a roll, keep them coming.

posted by Justi on August 15, 2009 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

Correction! POET...not "port" below

posted by Raphael222 on August 15, 2009 at 1:47 PM | link to this | reply

Yes...this is great!
A deeply felt lyric....Is it set to music? You ought to: A patriot through and through and a port, too!


posted by Raphael222 on August 15, 2009 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent poetry though I feel that those who hire in to fight elite-created wars may not be that patriotic!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on August 15, 2009 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply

That is Rite to Spin no doubt about it.
When will you video or at least sound it and put it on for us to hear. That is good, really good. It is good to see you back on here too.

posted by Justi on August 15, 2009 at 1:08 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! This is very poignant, what a message! I liked the refrain, too! sam

posted by sam444 on August 15, 2009 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply