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I really liked what you said about the sun playing with the clouds.
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FormerStudentIntern
on August 13, 2009 at 9:23 PM
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Re: YOUR POEM JUST MADE ME WANT TO DANCE TOMORROW
lol Kabu - even the dang mosquitos love you..
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 9:03 PM
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Re: That was a lovely day. I have a feeling you make them all great.
Justi - yes I try to and thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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Taps - Thank you so much and am glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 8:58 PM
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Soulbuilder - I hope clarity you preserve and get out of this thought that you may be hurt. Thank you and take care will you.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 8:57 PM
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Re: Nicely written - I could feel a new day begin
Hackthorne19 - thank you so much. am glad you could relate to it.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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Troosha - yes, you're so right. Nature is always taken for granted. Thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 8:54 PM
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Thank you so much Snowview.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 8:53 PM
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Re: I really loved this!
Malcolm - thank you so much.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 8:52 PM
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Lustorlove - thank you, it plays peek a boo here too..lol.
posted by
shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 8:52 PM
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YOUR POEM JUST MADE ME WANT TO DANCE TOMORROW
MORNING WHEN THE GRASS IS DAMP. i WOULD BUT FOR THE DANG MOSQUITOES.
posted by
Kabu
on August 13, 2009 at 6:50 PM
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That was a lovely day. I have a feeling you make them all great.
Great poetic
posted by
Justi
on August 13, 2009 at 5:29 PM
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The day is gone, but while the earth remains, there will always be another. And, you describe them so beautifully.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 13, 2009 at 4:01 PM
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I used to live in the bush, within nature....not as an observer. Now I live in the concrete jungle with not many good people around me. I have to preserve my clarity or I may be hurt!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on August 13, 2009 at 1:37 PM
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Nicely written - I could feel a new day begin
posted by
Hackthorne19
on August 13, 2009 at 6:49 AM
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Shobana
Watching a sunrise can be a moment so filled with hope. It’s unfortunate that many of us don’t carry that sentiment with us throughout the day – it seems to dissipate the moment we step into the tug and pull of “daily life”.
Erase the blackboard of misgivings
Fill those empty spaces with hope good advice…… 
posted by
Troosha
on August 13, 2009 at 6:31 AM
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Very inspiring and beautifully written! Thanks for stopping by! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on August 13, 2009 at 4:53 AM
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thank you Elinjo, am so glad you liked it.
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shobana
on August 13, 2009 at 1:46 AM
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Looking at the sky does inspire hope. I loved this poem and its rich imagery.
posted by
elinjo
on August 13, 2009 at 1:43 AM
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I really loved this!
posted by
malcolm
on August 13, 2009 at 1:07 AM
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You are very welcome my dear friend! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 12, 2009 at 11:01 PM
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My Sam - thank you so much. I get lost in your imagery too and your poems and learn a lot from them. Thank you so much for appreciating my poems.
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shobana
on August 12, 2009 at 10:59 PM
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My Shobana, I just get lost in your imagery! This is so very wonderful! I liked how you engaged the reader to come along! Then it is a poem where, at least for me, true appreciation is garnered by a slow read to truly absorb the incredulous imagery! This is definitely one of my favorites!!!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 12, 2009 at 10:56 PM
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around here the sun has been playing peek a boo
posted by
Lanetay
on August 12, 2009 at 10:26 PM
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