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Poignant beauty waiting alone in anticipation and hope....pensive poetry !We all wish for better times.
posted by
merkie
on August 6, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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It is always amazing to me what beautiful expressions appear on the screen from a mere human's thoughts. Parts of this sound as if it must have come from an angel.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 5, 2009 at 11:53 AM
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I NEED TO READ THIS AGAIN
posted by
Star5_
on August 5, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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'I know that after everything-always something comes'---hold onto that fact
Sad but so very Beautifull!Chris,
posted by
Scramble
on August 5, 2009 at 7:14 AM
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Beautiful and perceptive!
posted by
Nita09
on August 5, 2009 at 4:20 AM
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Very deep.. moving...
..thank you
posted by
MasonGarrett
on August 5, 2009 at 1:56 AM
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so long as it is waiting and when that spark of opportunity comes, on you jump as it carries you on that fun filled rollercoaster.......
posted by
spiderfly
on August 4, 2009 at 10:32 PM
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The movement of your poem gracefully moves us on, feeling refreshed sweetheart. BCA, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink
posted by
BC-A
on August 4, 2009 at 9:10 PM
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such agony of waiting.your words ring so true.
posted by
Kabu
on August 4, 2009 at 8:57 PM
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Waiting for the missing facets of life to show up can be long and excruciating. When better can't be done, let the worst continue.....has been my motto for far too long!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on August 4, 2009 at 6:09 PM
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Oh wow, these lines are very haunting:
I sit in the void your absence left
where the memory of what was roams,
and I wait.
Great work!!!
posted by
Ariala
on August 4, 2009 at 5:37 PM
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So many people wait and something good comes.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 4, 2009 at 5:25 PM
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