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spiderfly ~.~
Thanks! ...glad you enjoyed it. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 3, 2009 at 4:17 AM
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to other realms, where there is peace , so i close my eyes and hope the swirling will stop soon. and i smile.........lovely piece.....
posted by
spiderfly
on August 2, 2009 at 11:31 PM
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You're welcome, chuck! ~.~
I really and truly appreciate your comments. Thanks! Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 2, 2009 at 11:26 PM
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Thanks, Bill! ~.~
I'm glad you enjoyed this journey of the mind. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 2, 2009 at 11:24 PM
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Thank you very much, sam! ~.~
...I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 2, 2009 at 11:21 PM
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Straightforward ~.~
Thanks! -- I appreciate your comment and your visit. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 2, 2009 at 11:20 PM
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Decshak ~.~
That's one possible explanation. Thanks for your comment and your visit -- much appreciated. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 2, 2009 at 11:18 PM
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Thanks, Chris ~.~
I'm glad you liked it! Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on August 2, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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Lovely soulspeaker! It certainly makes me think! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on August 2, 2009 at 1:01 PM
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Other realms.
Not meaning to put the cabash on your mental wanderings/wonderings, your piece reminds me that we are being constantly bombarded by cosmic particles which mostly pass through us, but sometimes I think that single bits actually hit some atoms of my molecules randomly, and that I can feel them, lol.... I have seen them, though. Once when there was a supernova I saw a light flash on some metal, like a spark of electricity....
posted by
WindTapper
on August 2, 2009 at 6:52 AM
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Interesting take. Gives meaning to loneliness...
posted by
Straightforward
on August 1, 2009 at 7:18 PM
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Your last quatrain is outstanding! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 1, 2009 at 5:30 PM
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Oh, wow it’s like an inanimate Whoville out of Dr. Seuss. The philosophical implications here are profound. You can plug in your brand of perception: Your religion or philosophy might affect what and how you see. Moreover there are psychological factors involved although they might not be formal scientifically. Your poetry’s looking good. BCA, Bill*s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on August 1, 2009 at 7:36 AM
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A beautiful poem with excellent imagery. The idea of the poem is very powerful
Thank you for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on August 1, 2009 at 6:47 AM
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