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Awesome Sinome!
Such is life for so many; you have captured daily life perfectly; excellent; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on July 31, 2009 at 4:41 AM
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Sad sometimes, but how true.
posted by
SomeoneElse
on July 31, 2009 at 4:10 AM
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Indeed, tomorrow is another day!
posted by
Nita09
on July 31, 2009 at 2:43 AM
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Sinome - just another day so aptly told. Been through everything you listed there.
posted by
shobana
on July 30, 2009 at 10:59 PM
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I really like this little story of yours
posted by
Lanetay
on July 30, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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We call that SAME OLD, SAME OLD!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 30, 2009 at 6:15 PM
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A poem we can all relate to at some point.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 30, 2009 at 4:36 PM
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Sinome ~.~
Great write! Well conveyed ...things mostly stay the same. Thanks so much for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 30, 2009 at 3:07 PM
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This is great! I love the idea of just another day, when it is time to play! Love you tons! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on July 30, 2009 at 2:07 PM
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Wonderful! This one helped me out a bit, I burn myself out sometimes trying to do everything before the day ends. What do you know, there's another day just like it on the other side! Lol
posted by
calia14
on July 30, 2009 at 2:00 PM
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I love this Sinome-;Just another day'-at start and end! Feels quite sad but
I love it and it's so true!
posted by
Scramble
on July 30, 2009 at 1:30 PM
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Sinome, its interesting how we hold on to each day and to the past, as if
we could ever change either...the man and the woman, both with their secrets, "pretending" all is still well..
....
posted by
Rumor
on July 30, 2009 at 12:06 PM
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I guess make the most of time. BCA, Bill*s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on July 30, 2009 at 10:57 AM
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Somewhat pensive Sinome but elegant in expression of the routine!Another day begins.
posted by
merkie
on July 30, 2009 at 9:45 AM
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Sinome
listening to mermaids,
entangled in their braids
hearing the words he wants to hear in their serenades.
Stellar and extremely poetic and creative lines, my friend. Again sadness resonates throughout the piece – of dreams lost or dreams not worth wishing for but you always do it with such grace and tenderness.
posted by
Troosha
on July 30, 2009 at 9:08 AM
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The thoughts of this poem will accompany me tomorrow when I have decided to spend a day on the beach (providing the heavens don't open). Galicia does grow on you, don't you agree?
posted by
vogue
on July 30, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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take one day at a time, and live the best of it.....
posted by
Star5_
on July 30, 2009 at 6:45 AM
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