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I thought this was cool!
I feel I understand that no matter ones efforts and regardless of our trials the relentless agony never ceases.. Hold on to each breath and take one in deep... smile and look at the sun for a moment and think.. I can write more of this :) Keep going!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on July 27, 2009 at 6:50 PM
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Very Identifyable
A great interpretation and representation of what lurks at the core in each of us. I like your style; rhythm and meter always seems to add beauty to any poetical work regardless of the subject matter. I wrote a similar piece titled "Rio Diablos" I would be honored to have you review it for me...
you can find it in my "Poetic Reflections" blog. Thanks G.
posted by
GeorgeEdwinJohns
on July 27, 2009 at 3:22 PM
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You apply thrilling to your life personally. BCA, Bill*s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on July 27, 2009 at 2:53 PM
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