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What an awesome close! I am just now getting caught up with you! I took a lazy day and puttered around my place. No agenda, nothing to accomplish and it was a blast! Love you! sammie
posted by
sam444
on July 26, 2009 at 12:34 AM
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My kind of poem--brief and to the point--a clarity and singleness of vision with a lot of things happening. Bravo!!
posted by
jfm32
on July 25, 2009 at 4:33 PM
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A haunting poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 25, 2009 at 4:31 PM
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"life's stage" can really be both tricky and intruiging at times, Sinome...
as Shakespeare said "all the world's a stage" - the question often becomes, who's playing who?..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 25, 2009 at 3:54 PM
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Very philosophical piece. I like it!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 25, 2009 at 12:33 PM
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Sinome
~ sigh ~ Sometimes our dreams take us to peaceful places yet sometimes they can be haunting. I think I prefer your spin….
posted by
Troosha
on July 25, 2009 at 8:49 AM
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very nice setting, I have a hard time remembering those dreams
posted by
Lanetay
on July 25, 2009 at 8:35 AM
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Sinome ~.~
You write so beautifully...this piece is so mysteriously serene. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on July 25, 2009 at 7:53 AM
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intriguing
posted by
calia14
on July 25, 2009 at 12:28 AM
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Nice one Sinome..Surreal energy unlocks the dreams that sleep in the "dark".
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 24, 2009 at 11:24 PM
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