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So beautiful!

I just wanted to say hi. I am new to this site. Your poem, Desire, is beautiful!! It tugged a lot on my heart strings. I just went through the same thing, the same feelings with the man I am now with. Every single time we were on the edge of becoming far more than friends, we would deny deny deny, until neither of us could deny our feelings for one another any longer. We were the best of friends for a yr and a half, and have now been together as way more for a couple months. We now realize and know without a doubt we are it for each other! Thank you so much for sharing!!

~Velvet Blue~

posted by Velvet_Blue on March 5, 2010 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Close shaves with toy razors...well done, my friend!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 24, 2009 at 3:50 PM | link to this | reply

Very intense!  Smoking hot

posted by calia14 on July 23, 2009 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

Amen! Desire does rule the heart! I loved the imagery, throughout! sam

posted by sam444 on July 20, 2009 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

Wow Great Stuff
I've been in that situation a few times.

posted by jollyjeff on July 20, 2009 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

Nice poem about your wants
and feeling your way around them.


Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on July 20, 2009 at 5:27 AM | link to this | reply