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                Such finality! Striking imagery! I saw you note at my blog; I am so tired! I inherited a ton of weeds but the front looks smashing now! lol Then I found a small snake in the back yard! I have a bunny and a rabbit that refuse to live at their own places! It is rather comical to watch the bunny and the cat play! Have a great day tomorrow Sweetie! Love you very, very much! sammie 


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                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on July 13, 2009 at 9:49 PM
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                Thanks for blowing that kiss.and one to you as well. And, of course, baby!!  
                
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                    vogue
                     on July 13, 2009 at 9:39 PM
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                No one captures those feelings in such magic words like you.

Miss you, miss Miami, miss my adopted country!! Blow the ocean a kiss for me, will you.  
                
                    posted by
                    vogue
                     on July 13, 2009 at 9:00 PM
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                Time can do some funny things to those wounds.  
                
                    posted by
                    FormerStudentIntern
                     on July 13, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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                    Sinome, you've captured how I'd feel if I was ever to lose Liz and it is
                
                frightening...wouldn't matter how I lost her, it would likely do me in..



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                    posted by
                    Rumor
                     on July 13, 2009 at 4:32 PM
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                    Sinome
                
                As Raphael said – beautiful, terrible, beautiful.  I’ll add sorrowful.  I wonder… is she really gone?  

  
                
                    posted by
                    Troosha
                     on July 13, 2009 at 9:14 AM
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                    This poem is absolutely excellent....
                
                ...and beautiful...terrible, but beautiful.....  
Almost upsets me to read it...I feel it. And you conveyed that feeling.....
  Enough words.....





    
                
                    posted by
                    Raphael222
                     on July 13, 2009 at 8:17 AM
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                Le temps est un grand maître, dit-on, le malheur est qu'il tue ses élèves. ~Berlioz
    
                
                    posted by
                    TAPS.
                     on July 12, 2009 at 11:03 PM
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                    Excellent work, Sinome!
                
                

 
  
                
                    posted by
                    teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
                     on July 12, 2009 at 10:32 PM
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                Sinome - such soulful beautiful feelings.
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    shobana
                     on July 12, 2009 at 10:32 PM
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                    Sinome
                
                Impeccable chère Sinome
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    WileyJohn
                     on July 12, 2009 at 10:07 PM
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                    she might be waiting just for him at the other side of the isle......
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on July 12, 2009 at 10:02 PM
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