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I like the participation factor.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 11, 2009 at 5:21 PM | link to this | reply

too much fun, can't wait to see it evolve.

posted by texture on July 11, 2009 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

Such beauty found
 
On this bright day
 
Woodland creatures run and play
 
And smiles are bright
 
On this fine day

posted by BrightIrish on July 11, 2009 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

and I really want to doze

work calls me this bright day

really why cant I just play

posted by Lanetay on July 11, 2009 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

Sorry, Calia ~.~
...a slip of the mind, then the fingers (in responding).

posted by soulspeaker on July 11, 2009 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

 Oh, wow what a cool way to start the day l ve. BCA, BillJRoost

posted by BC-A on July 11, 2009 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome ~.~

To dream, to think

and then compose

a verse,

be it in rhyme or prose

Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on July 11, 2009 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

No prob Sinome!

posted by calia14 on July 10, 2009 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

No I like "While in the sky" arather than "As in the sky"  Please change it Calia :-)  my finger hit "add comment " too fast  loll

posted by Sinome on July 10, 2009 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply

As in the sky

the sun shines bright

we try to rhyme

to pass the time

 

through words we find

that like in  dreams

time passes fast

we're done... at last!

 

posted by Sinome on July 10, 2009 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply