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Very impressive.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 4, 2009 at 5:25 PM
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Beautiful.
posted by
texture
on July 4, 2009 at 12:12 PM
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Love this calia! Excellent form and content. The expression of tired in the last line is so meaningful. Leaves one wondering what the rest of the story is!
posted by
merkie
on July 4, 2009 at 8:57 AM
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Re: sam444
Thanks okay! It helps to see that you can alter it slightly and still use the format to enhance the poem.
posted by
calia14
on July 4, 2009 at 4:45 AM
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I have great admiration for those who can adhere to form... but this poem is not only well written its amazing in content and meaning as well... Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 3, 2009 at 9:45 PM
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You have everything correct according to format! There are times when I use the form but do not follow it explicitly and Prelude OF Pity is one of those! So sorry if I confused you! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 3, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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Aw, thanks
lol
posted by
calia14
on July 3, 2009 at 8:19 PM
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Excellent, excellent!!!!! I so adore this! You made great use of the repeating lines and WHAT IMAGERY, TOO!!!!
I am very, very proud of you! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 3, 2009 at 8:18 PM
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