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Nice Poem! Great imagery.
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
on July 3, 2009 at 9:28 PM
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I feel so lulled. Excellent poem, so comforting and sweet. I love the hint of whimsy towards the end, as well.
posted by
calia14
on July 3, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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Beautiful!
I could just go to sleep right now
posted by
lionreign
on July 3, 2009 at 8:24 AM
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I was thinking restful, too! What an awesome, comforting poem! Your imagery is so very beautiful! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on July 3, 2009 at 7:00 AM
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What a restful, soothing picture--very beautiful, as always!
posted by
Nita09
on July 3, 2009 at 5:34 AM
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Sinome
This conjures up such a memorable and peaceful image! Beautifully written my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on July 3, 2009 at 4:44 AM
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Sinome, what a beautiful picture you paint with your words..indescribable. Thank you so much for reading me and have a wonderful weekend.
posted by
shobana
on July 2, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Such a soothing read.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 2, 2009 at 5:03 PM
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You've brought me to tears darling, all I miss from Australia really is
a grandchild in my arms. Your wonderful poem took me back to another time and place for a few wonderful moments. Thank you dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on July 2, 2009 at 4:16 PM
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Sinome
I just woke up from an afternoon nap to read this luv and now you've lulled me into thinking of going back and doing it again now.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 2, 2009 at 3:55 PM
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