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gave me goose pumps!
Lovly and true, I'll read this one over again a few more times 
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on October 30, 2012 at 8:13 AM
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So very ture
Lovley poem, so thoughtful and open minded. Made me ponder a few things.
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on June 22, 2012 at 7:03 AM
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empathy
your angst touched me. You are a brave lady
posted by
RoseyP
on October 19, 2010 at 3:00 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 30, 2010 at 3:08 PM
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Awsome read deep and profound as if only you can do. Amazing as always!
posted by
Mystereo
on September 30, 2010 at 3:04 PM
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just checked back into blogit to do a few reads--was looking for an elevator and wasn't expecting a minor explosion...Defiance--is there anthing else you write about? That's what makes you unique--that you have this smoledering theme, and everytime you write in a moment, there is always something else "over the top" to relate to.
Ok, so you wake me up--but that's the only reason I like reading you.
In this one, I especially liked "pampered hatred/hardened tears". You say a lot in a few words. But when I got to the umbrella, did you mean negation, or negotiation?
posted by
jfm32
on October 7, 2009 at 6:21 PM
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Ahh ... Most touching and poignant, Purple ....
posted by
anib
on September 8, 2009 at 6:15 AM
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BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on August 25, 2009 at 1:05 PM
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Hoping you are doing better, Mermaid. Deep feelings in these words you have written.
posted by
adnohr
on August 7, 2009 at 6:21 PM
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quite right there...
posted by
bythewindowsill
on August 6, 2009 at 12:18 AM
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Such striking and poignant imagery...I hope she makes her way out.
posted by
mariss9
on July 10, 2009 at 10:49 AM
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Came by again to read this poem!
posted by
Straightforward
on July 10, 2009 at 10:09 AM
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hey .......
posted by
Star5_
on July 10, 2009 at 9:36 AM
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Excellent! ... very well expressed!
posted by
Chilitree
on July 9, 2009 at 12:03 AM
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Beautiful and very powerful
thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on July 8, 2009 at 9:50 PM
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Profound and powerful .....
posted by
afzal50
on July 7, 2009 at 5:32 PM
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Powerful fight you have going to regain the wellbeing of you~ our special Mermaid! This is excellent expression of your emotions! Hugs!
posted by
merkie
on July 4, 2009 at 8:49 AM
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I have no doubt that you are a strong woman and that you will prevail upon these test G-d has sent you. Hang in there my friend. You are going to be OK xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 2, 2009 at 4:59 AM
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Nice to see you again Jen!
I hope you are doing well; I do believe our trials make us stronger and teach us the lessons of life at the very least; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on July 2, 2009 at 3:39 AM
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I suppose it's true what they say, whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger
posted by
calia14
on July 1, 2009 at 7:23 PM
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It's interesting how adversity can bring strength
posted by
Straightforward
on July 1, 2009 at 9:33 AM
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