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I have a feeling that from now on when it thunders,
I will think of some of the things you wrote in this poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 2, 2009 at 2:48 PM
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BCA, BillJRoost
You create a natural process of coping with grief love.
posted by
BC-A
on July 2, 2009 at 6:44 AM
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great write and reflective. Great memories enveloped in sadness. I always think that that is a pity.
posted by
spiderfly
on July 2, 2009 at 12:23 AM
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Lovely Sinome. A thunderous applause to you!
posted by
shobana
on July 1, 2009 at 9:12 PM
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The rain not only cleanses this earth, I've been there too when it cleansed my soul. I feel the "thunderous intensity of your poem Sinome and the letting go.
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 1, 2009 at 7:36 PM
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Powerful work! I was enthralled, I think everyone gets taken hostage by their own terrible memories now and again, you so wonderfully expressed the roller coaster that this takes us on!
posted by
calia14
on July 1, 2009 at 7:34 PM
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Lovely Sinome...
Powerful, poignant.....
Thank you. 
posted by
Raphael222
on July 1, 2009 at 5:56 PM
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vivid and thought provoking as always, Sinome...:)
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posted by
Rumor
on July 1, 2009 at 11:58 AM
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Living the sigh Excellent thundering communication to your audience leaving a restless peace! Well said Sinome
posted by
merkie
on July 1, 2009 at 10:04 AM
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Once again you grab the reader by the heart and throat
and take us through the emotional mill with you - excellently done
posted by
lionreign
on July 1, 2009 at 8:38 AM
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Powerful imagery and beautifully expressed thoughts. Love your poems!
posted by
Nita09
on July 1, 2009 at 8:37 AM
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Beautiful imagery and I share in your sigh! sammie
Love how the rainbow was presented, a sure sign of new hope!
posted by
sam444
on July 1, 2009 at 7:12 AM
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"Cold tears
in warm afternoons" - simply beautiful
posted by
malcolm
on July 1, 2009 at 6:16 AM
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Remarkable my dear Sinome
I believe storms are necessary in order to cleanse and prepare for the coming rainbow! Beautifully done; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on July 1, 2009 at 4:24 AM
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Yes, darling, there is always a rainbow at the end of any storm and where else to view it better than in my beloved Miami. The sand is still on my toes and will stay there until I'm back to step on South Beach.
posted by
vogue
on June 30, 2009 at 10:11 PM
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storm clouds are all around
posted by
Lanetay
on June 30, 2009 at 8:59 PM
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booooooohooo don't worry, it gets better...
posted by
Star5_
on June 30, 2009 at 6:27 PM
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Thunders was an approrpiate word to use.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 30, 2009 at 5:44 PM
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