Go to Sleepless Writings
- Add a comment
- Go to THE TRUTH
Truth
This is a beautiful sad reality in our time. Men need so much encouragement and support to realize their strength, to see how competent they are. Sometimes I think they need us to fall into their arms and stop being strong to start being the strong men they are and to really let their masculinity come through. Yeah for the real man inside! You put the heartache so beautifully.
posted by
Marion_I.
on November 27, 2003 at 8:25 AM
| link to this | reply
Poetic DD
Poignant and true. Sweet poem, I enjoyed it.
posted by
Katray2
on November 26, 2003 at 7:18 AM
| link to this | reply
On ain
I Love this soliloquy.
The pain you feel runs
deep through my heart.
My heart bleeds for you
Sweet drop of dew.
posted by
OleBlue
on November 26, 2003 at 1:20 AM
| link to this | reply
It's not Ungh, the caveman...
but it's pretty damn good anyway. Well done PD.
posted by
Elmubarak
on November 26, 2003 at 1:03 AM
| link to this | reply