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Sinome
Beautifully worded....and so true. Personally, I hate to just lie there in the sun....I can handle maybe 20 minutes.....maybe for the exact reasons you examine....
posted by
Krisles
on June 30, 2009 at 6:53 PM
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Count me in as another one who likes the imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 30, 2009 at 5:45 PM
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Your imagery feels beautiful and relaxing. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on June 30, 2009 at 7:58 AM
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Your talent becomes more aparent with every verse,
with each line, your gift is phenomenal and this poem an example of it's awesome scope. Brilliantly written.
posted by
lionreign
on June 30, 2009 at 7:56 AM
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Sinome
An important message and such vivid imagery my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 30, 2009 at 4:35 AM
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What a beautiful, vivid picture, and full of insights. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 30, 2009 at 3:07 AM
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Sad to miss the beauty and shut out the music of the day. Missing out !Well said!
posted by
merkie
on June 29, 2009 at 10:47 PM
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