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So wonderfully written and I love the ending, beautiful Sinome.
Amazingly, this chaotic and intertwined world does in moments sing as one.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 26, 2009 at 6:39 AM
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It is ripples in the water but what a wonderful swim! Outstanding! sammie
xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on June 25, 2009 at 7:56 PM
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excellent write
Your description is superb, I have an image of happy chaos leading to a wise epiphany, I was very much engrossed and had a happy smile of my own by the end of it
posted by
lionreign
on June 25, 2009 at 7:54 AM
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What a wonderful picture springs to my mind's eye Sinome
you have shown me a sight I had never seen! Excellent imagery indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 25, 2009 at 4:23 AM
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Wonderful, Sinome. What a place to be--in nature, with people, observing life and having philosophical thoughts. Great places those parks.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 24, 2009 at 4:03 PM
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I am humbled by the greatness of that little spark of light,
that shows me in an instant , the consciousness of it all
and I walk away with the feeling that I am,
nothing and everything,
a ripple in the waters of life.
Love it. xooxoxox
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on June 24, 2009 at 2:21 PM
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Very beautiful and profound. Blessings. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 24, 2009 at 11:58 AM
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Very enthralling.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 24, 2009 at 11:50 AM
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Enchanting poetry sinome. You are a writer of wisdom today. Bravo! Ah to see again with childrens eyes sigh!
posted by
merkie
on June 24, 2009 at 11:16 AM
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Sinome
The sights, sounds, and faces in the park – all reminders that we are all one big motion in the ocean of time. I thoroughly enjoyed the journey you took us through to arrive at this epiphany. Well done, my friend....
posted by
Troosha
on June 24, 2009 at 10:28 AM
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