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What's up? I haven't seen you lately, sweetie! Love you! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on June 22, 2009 at 8:11 PM
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A beautiful melancholic poem Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on June 22, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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wow, this is a beautiful piece
I love the frantic, frenetic aspects of the storm fading to the sad grey at the end, your melancholy is so beautifully expressed, my dear
posted by
lionreign
on June 22, 2009 at 7:48 AM
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I'm always amazed at the depth and power of your thoughts and use of words to convey them--excellent. Thanks for your kind comment on my post; I am grateful for your concern and support. My son Ashish is back to work in Bangalore; I worry about him, and depend on all your prayers for the new medicines to work. Love and blessings. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 22, 2009 at 5:17 AM
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I hear the strength is this
posted by
Lanetay
on June 21, 2009 at 9:22 PM
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Excellent portrayal of a difficult thought! Love you, too!!! xoxoxoxox sammie
posted by
sam444
on June 21, 2009 at 7:27 PM
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Always excellent verse!
posted by
merkie
on June 21, 2009 at 7:27 PM
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That would so painful.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 21, 2009 at 2:03 PM
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Sinome
Powerful! And one would hope for a fond return...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 21, 2009 at 5:22 AM
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Gripping and so sad...beautifully written
posted by
Ariala
on June 21, 2009 at 4:05 AM
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Very touching poem.
posted by
elinjo
on June 21, 2009 at 2:23 AM
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