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                Very beautiful, specially the ending.   
                
                    posted by
                    Nita09
                     on June 22, 2009 at 5:11 AM
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                Aching heart sad and lonely.The words flow with your tears!

 
  
                
                    posted by
                    merkie
                     on June 20, 2009 at 7:08 PM
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                I was hoping for a happy ending.  
                
                    posted by
                    FormerStudentIntern
                     on June 20, 2009 at 5:30 PM
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                    You speak the words of many Hearts, my friend...
                
                




 
  
                
                    posted by
                    teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
                     on June 20, 2009 at 9:32 AM
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                So sad, a broken heart and the ending is heart stopping. Beautifully written Sinome.  
                
                    posted by
                    yellowrose55
                     on June 20, 2009 at 9:28 AM
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                how sad
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    Lanetay
                     on June 20, 2009 at 9:28 AM
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                So final and heartbreaking! But great imagery throughout! sammie 


xoxoxo  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on June 20, 2009 at 8:25 AM
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                    never again, well I dance with you.....you are bringing seether to my mind 
                
                and his tunes......  
                
                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on June 20, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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